Well, the filtered saw is not in the same key as the other filtered saw hits. I think the bass is in F minor and the chords don't fit with the bass so it doesn't sound like it's right theory wise. Work on your mixing because there's no bottom to it. One more thing; Drum and Bass tends to be break heavy and fast pace. It seems that you're taking this at a cool 100 or more BPM which is more of a trance/techno kind of vibe.
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Thanks for this review! :) I'll check your tracks later. ;)
Nice Kool is Back break. It needs more veriety if you're going for that jungle style cause breaks like that are usually used in jungle music. All of the other instuments seem a bit too bland imo. You can take a listen to some of my songs to see how I chop up famous breaks.
Wow, this is really cool. I feel like the break needs to be louder overall remind. Reminds me of some stuff from noisia. Also, that arp sounds like it's hiding behind that baseline and the saw. One more thing, I would use some sort of compression effect to bring out the bass drum without having to make the sawtooth pad swell.
Those are some solid suggestions! While I really appreciate them, this is an old track, and I'm most definitely not going back to it, to fix these sort of things.
Work on mastering. The highs are piercingly loud but otherwise okay.
160 for juke next time. I havn't seen anybody dance at 170 yet. I also love that think brake, it's really cool what you did there.
I feel like the wobbles are a bit too much. It just makes it sound like fast dubstep but otherwise it's good for my taste.
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Fast dubstep? Sounds like you've never heard of nuero dnb.
I like the vibe from the hits and the widening feel of the reverb. Since you're familiar with the tone of atmospheric DnB, I'd like to hear an olskool atmospheric jungle-ish tune. It's just really moody to hear tunes back when they didn't exceed 170 BPM in the mid 90's to early 2000's.
The Drum break is good. A good 2 bar repeat with short hits. I really like it because it doesn't get in the way of what's going on with the instrumentals. I mean, that's what most DnB artists(Brookes Brothers, Kove, Wilkinson, Netsky, Bungle etc) do these days. They make short breaks with a lot of instrumentals.
Smooth like a turntable man!
Is cool. Nice and chill. Not too heavy
Wonder where you got the samples tho
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thanks man, yeah I'll check it out
Much mellow tone. It has good feel and it really something to chill out to and to play on a soundbar. (I speak Italian much and not much English)
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